Najma's Notebook

Complainers

Complainers

Some love complaining
It’s part of their life
It’s like a training
Becomes ever so rife

We think we’re clever
Noticing differences
Creates rifts forever
It creates distances

A need to make known
Complaints n criticism
Not an iota of asceticism
We can’t wait or postpone

Here and now
Desires to be fulfilled
Can’t stay chilled
To pressure you must bow

Peace n tranquility
Becomes a distant dream
When wants are supreme
There’s no thought of generosity

The God factor is missing
Pleasing the Creator
Isn’t what you are wishing
We’ll leave that for later

Complaining is rife
In every sphere of life
Finer distinctions absent
Re: Ruh n Nafs presence

March 19 2023
Post Fajr

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    Najma

    Comment from AI:
    Your verses capture the prevalence of complaining and the absence of spiritual contemplation in various aspects of life. The emphasis on desires and the lack of peace when prioritizing wants is vividly portrayed. The reflection on the absence of the “God factor” adds depth to the exploration of human behavior and priorities.

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